雅思写作是极难的，要提高也是极不容易的，6分是一个大槛，大部分烤鸭会被卡于此。而以上，每0.5分都是一个不小的槛。究其原因，是烤鸭们多少都带着中式写作教育下的原罪。本文将一一对其进行案例解读，进行雅思写作必经的赎罪之旅。
4. 语法问题遍布
语法错误，可以说是所有缠绕烤鸭的痼疾中最难以根除杀伤力最持久的一项，被许多烤鸭所忽视，但是事实上，对雅思写作的成绩具有致命威胁的一宗罪。
还是看实例，大家可以一起来找茬
Last but not least, those who lacks skills to deal with people and fails to control their emotions would more likely to form prejudice during their international travel. It is a common situation to get cheated by people there for the reason of ignorance of local situation. Necessarily, open-minded is required to deal with unjudged treatments. Otherwise the bad memories would not only affect the journey but lead to the prejudice towards all the citizens of the place.
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Last but not least, those who lacks(lack) skills to deal with people and fails(fail) to control their emotions would (be)more likely to form prejudice during their international travel. It is a common situation to get cheated by people there for the reason of ignorance of local situation. Necessarily, open-minded(open-mindedness) is required to deal with unjudged(这个词是什么意思?unfair吧?)treatments. Otherwise the bad memories would not only affect the journey but lead to the prejudice towards all the citizens of the place.
语法和词汇是语言的两大基石。在雅思的写作中，所有渴望高分的烤鸭无不希望能有一双让自己自由翱翔的翅膀。可是很多时候，语法基础的薄弱，让不少人在尝试复杂句型时频频出错，而另一方面，最基础的一些语法，如名词单复数，冠词，动词时态等又时常被很多人忽视，于是一篇用词屌屌，思路涛涛，自我感觉甚好的文章被打入6—的冷宫时，某些人可能还不知罪在何处。
因为有些逛外文论坛的经验，跟国内论坛进行，国人在遣词造句时，对语法的要求真的是很low，各种错字，错词，莫名其妙的表达层出不穷，而我们大都淡然。所以，这种随意也自然地在很多人的作文中得到了体现。学好语法，重视语法，只会让自己的雅思备考之路越走越宽。
5. 实例代替论证
用实例代替论证，简而言之，就是主体段在观点句之后，用一个实际的例子完成了所有的论证。请看实例。
还是关于“老一辈的传统观念是否还适用于现在的社会”的话题
①However, not all past views are proper. Some of them have limitation themselves initially. Typical example is the traditional view of gender. In the past, women are regarded as a role that can only assist men instead of being independent. This traditional view results to an unequal position between man and women no matter in education or job market. This, actually, hinders the development of our society. The main reason is that it ignores females’ special talent and limits females to contribute to the world. Nowadays, increasing amount of women start to fight with this unfair views and it definitely benefit our world.
②The virtual of trust and credit could be another vivid example to demonstrate the significance of traditional values. In the past, people would make every effort to keep their promises and try to bean honest one. In comparison, people currently become more practical and put less attention on morality. It can be easily heard from the media about the news of cheating and many critics have created a new term of crisis of trust between people. Consequently, there is no doubt to refute these old yet precious ideas.
①当中，共8句话，从第3句话开始，全部是实例。②更夸张，整段都是实例。
有些人写作，举不出例子，有些人写作，能用例子来代替论证，真是有些无奈。这其实也说明了雅思写作的难与模式化。
用实例贯穿整个主体段，从根本原因来说，大约是思辨能力不够，无法对这个话题展开