英文写作无论在国内考试还是留学考试中都占有很大的比例,但却一直是广大中国学生的弱项,在许多方面,体现出他们缺少语言运用的能力,包括词汇的理解,句式的变化等。这方面能力的培养需要日积月累。
现在,举出一些例子,大家要很好地体会这些句子改进前与改进后的变化,希望对同学们的写作有一点帮助。
1.Theartist’sworkpushesourcivilizationtoahigherlevel.
改进:Artists’workupgradesourcivilization.
2.Forexample,youworkinabigfactory.
改进:Supposeyouworkinabigfactory.
3.You’llfindyouarefitforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourmainjob.
改进:You’llfindthatyouarecutoutforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourcareer.
4.Wewillownnothingatallifwedependonluck.
改进:Wewillgetnothingifwerelyonluck.
5.Hewillgetahighersalarytoimprovehislivinglevel.
改进:Hewillgetahighersalary,thusimprovinghislife.
6.Theirbrainisstillveryyoung.
改进:Theyarestillimmature.
7.Dissatisfactionmakespeopleproducedesireforbetterthings.
改进:Dissatisfactionimpelspeopleforthebetter.
8.Theycan’tanalyzeclearlywhatisrightandwhatiswrong.
改进:Theycannottellrightfromwrong.
9.Itwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwithtime.
改进:Itwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseoftime.
10.Thoughitisnotthebestjob,itaffordtohislife.
改进:Thoughitisnotthebestjob,hecanmakeendsmeetwithit.
11.Sincepeoplearealwaysnotsatisfiedwiththeirpresentsituation,theywantfurtherdevelopment.
改进:Sincepeopleareneversatisfiedwiththeirstatusquo,theywantfurtherdevelopment.
12.Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobwhichcaneasilygetbigmoney.
改进:Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobthatcanbringthembigmoney.
13.Theylikeanactivelifebutnotapeacefullife.
改进:Theylikeanactiveliferatherthanapeacefulone.
14.Somecigarettesmayevencostalargersumofmoney.
改进:Somecigarettesmaycostevenmore.
15.Itisverynecessarytohavemorequalifiedscientistsandtechnicians.
改进:Qualifiedscientistsandtechniciansarenecessary.
16.Theycannotthinkclearly.
改进:Theycannotthinkstraight.
17.Moneycanimprovetheirlivingstandard.
改进:Moneycanimprovetheirlife.
18.Ifapersononlycaresaboutmoney,thiswillleadhimtobeunhappyallhislife.
改进:Ifapersononlycaresaboutmoney,hewillbemisledandwillbeunhappyallhislife.
19.Onepurposeofeducationistostudythewayinwhichtostudylater.
改进:Onepurposeofeducationistolearntolearn.
20.Manyparentsarrangetheirchildrentogotolearnpiano.
改进:Manyparentssendtheirchildrentopianoclasses.
21.Eatingoutsidehasthemostadvantagethatwecangoatanytimewhenwefinisheatingwithoutdoinganywashing.
改进:Thebestpartofeatingoutisthatwecanleaveeverythingbehindafterthemeal.
22.Smokingcanhelpyourelaxyourmind.
改进:Cigarettescanhelpyourelax.