英文写作无论在国内考试还是留学考试中都占有很大的比例，但却一直是广大中国学生的弱项，在许多方面，体现出他们缺少语言运用的能力，包括词汇的理解，句式的变化等。这方面能力的培养需要日积月累。
现在，举出一些例子，大家要很好地体会这些句子改进前与改进后的变化，希望对同学们的写作有一点帮助。
1．Theartist’sworkpushesourcivilizationtoahigherlevel．
改进：Artists’workupgradesourcivilization．
2．Forexample，youworkinabigfactory．
改进：Supposeyouworkinabigfactory．
3．You’llfindyouarefitforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourmainjob．
改进：You’llfindthatyouarecutoutforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourcareer．
4．Wewillownnothingatallifwedependonluck．
改进：Wewillgetnothingifwerelyonluck．
5．Hewillgetahighersalarytoimprovehislivinglevel．
改进：Hewillgetahighersalary，thusimprovinghislife．
6．Theirbrainisstillveryyoung．
改进：Theyarestillimmature．
7．Dissatisfactionmakespeopleproducedesireforbetterthings．
改进：Dissatisfactionimpelspeopleforthebetter．
8．Theycan’tanalyzeclearlywhatisrightandwhatiswrong．
改进：Theycannottellrightfromwrong．
9．Itwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwithtime．
改进：Itwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseoftime．
10．Thoughitisnotthebestjob，itaffordtohislife．
改进：Thoughitisnotthebestjob，hecanmakeendsmeetwithit．
11．Sincepeoplearealwaysnotsatisfiedwiththeirpresentsituation，theywantfurtherdevelopment．
改进：Sincepeopleareneversatisfiedwiththeirstatusquo，theywantfurtherdevelopment．
12．Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobwhichcaneasilygetbigmoney．
改进：Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobthatcanbringthembigmoney．
13．Theylikeanactivelifebutnotapeacefullife．
改进：Theylikeanactiveliferatherthanapeacefulone．
14．Somecigarettesmayevencostalargersumofmoney．
改进：Somecigarettesmaycostevenmore．
15．Itisverynecessarytohavemorequalifiedscientistsandtechnicians．
改进：Qualifiedscientistsandtechniciansarenecessary．
16．Theycannotthinkclearly．
改进：Theycannotthinkstraight．
17．Moneycanimprovetheirlivingstandard．
改进：Moneycanimprovetheirlife．
18．Ifapersononlycaresaboutmoney，thiswillleadhimtobeunhappyallhislife．
改进：Ifapersononlycaresaboutmoney，hewillbemisledandwillbeunhappyallhislife．
19．Onepurposeofeducationistostudythewayinwhichtostudylater．
改进：Onepurposeofeducationistolearntolearn．
20．Manyparentsarrangetheirchildrentogotolearnpiano．
改进：Manyparentssendtheirchildrentopianoclasses．
21．Eatingoutsidehasthemostadvantagethatwecangoatanytimewhenwefinisheatingwithoutdoinganywashing．
改进：Thebestpartofeatingoutisthatwecanleaveeverythingbehindafterthemeal．
22．Smokingcanhelpyourelaxyourmind．
改进：Cigarettescanhelpyourelax．