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"What to write" is important, but "how to write" is more important. So we must give full play to our strengths and avoid our weaknesses. "I want to hold your hand". It seems that it is not suitable to write argumentative papers, let alone syllogism argumentative papers. However, the examinee just played the advantages of writing argumentative papers by himself. After careful design, he danced gracefully in the restriction and wrote such a glowing argumentative paper, that is to say.
This is a composition rated 68. Its success can be summed up in the following points: first, high intention. "I want to hold the hand of the one who tells the truth", it is indeed higher than other ideas. In the real society, it's not easy to tell the truth. It takes courage. Sometimes it costs life. So it's precious to hold their hands. 2、 The structure is clear. The author wrote this composition after careful consideration. At the beginning, he directly presented his views. He summarized the whole paper with three key words of "respect", "support" and "determination". When explaining the reasons for "thinking", according to these three aspects in turn, the level is very clear, and the level is progressive, step by step enriching the connotation of "handshake". The last paragraph refers to the topic and the beginning, sublimation The main idea is to make the structure complete. 3、 Content enrichment. From a formal point of view, this is still a "syllogism" argumentative paper. The general argument is divided into three sub arguments, but there are abundant arguments and analysis under the sub arguments, so that the content is full and substantial. 4、 Fluent language. It is a more elegant argumentative paper.
The full text is based on the fictitious "you" - literature, which expresses the deep feeling of the heart with the words full of feelings. It is necessary to hold the hand of literature until forever. In this paper, we use "it's you", "it's you" and "it's still you" to expound "the reason why we should hold the hand of literature tightly": literature makes us travel through time and space; makes our life colorful; makes us feel the philosophy of life. During this period, there are not only the free display, but also the reflection of literary connotation. The writing is fluent, and the whole sentence like parallelism is often used, which is full of emotion and has a momentum of one breath. It is worth mentioning that the first and last language, with the appeal of "shaking hands with literature", shows the comprehensive ability of candidates to use words. The obvious disadvantage is that there are too many citations, the suspicion of falling out of the bag, it seems simple and insufficient, and there are more algae. In fact, to write one's feelings for literature does not lie in how much one knows, but in the inseparable affinity between oneself and literature, which makes literature an important part of one's life.
[examination room tips] it should be said that such a warm topic as "I want to hold your hand" is beneficial to students who are interested in literature. To write a good composition, one is to fully mobilize their own literary accumulation, the other is to learn to create mood and lyric, and use the second person to turn the emptiness into reality, which is conducive to lyricism. In addition, the use of whole sentences such as parallelism can spread all the way and push forward layer by layer, which makes the feelings more gloomy and the writing more infectious.