I have many friends, but Jim is one of my best friends. He is not handsome, but kind-hearted. We know each other at primary school. He was the tallest in our class at that time. He is good at study and playing basketball, while bad at playing table tennis. Everytime he has delicious food, he will give it to me. Moreover, whenever I feel sad, he will play with me and comfort me. However, he is not spoilt me. For example, everytime I meet difficulties in study, I would like to copy his, but no matter what I say, he never give his homework to me to copy. Instead he teaches how to do it. All in all, no matter what difficulties I meet, he will help me. It is him make me realize that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
我有很多朋友，不过吉姆是我最好的朋友之一。他长得不帅，但是很善良。我们在小学的时候就互相认识了。那时，他是我们班里最高的。他的学习成绩很好。他很擅长打篮球但是乒乓球却打得很烂。每次有好吃的他都让给我吃。而且每次我不开心的时候他都会陪我玩，安慰我。但是他并不宠溺我，比如说，在做作业的时候我遇到不懂的就总想抄他的，那个时候不管我怎么求他，他从来都没给我抄过作业，而是教我如何去写。总之不管我遇到什么困难，他都会帮助我。他让我明白了患难见真情。
点评：be good at 和be bad at是一对反义词，前者是擅长于做某事，后者是不擅长于做某事。spoil有溺爱的意思。a friend in need is a friend indeed是一句谚语，患难见真情。
Maybe you will surprise that my best friend is book. But you don’t need to suspect you hearing, it’s true, book is my best friend. I like reading since I was a child. The knowledge in the book makes me feel enjoyable and peaceful. When I am unhappy, I will go to find my best friend---book. And then I will forget the the things that make me unhappy and attract by the book’s content. From the book, I learn the story of Helen Keller, I know the history in the ancient times, I also know the culture of foreign countries that I have never been. Therefore, I think book will be my best friend forever.
也许你会很惊讶，我最好的朋友是书。不过你不用怀疑你听到的，这是真的，我最好的朋友是书。在我还是个小孩的时候我就喜欢阅读。书中的知识能让我开心，平静。当我不开心的时候。我会去找我最好的朋友——书。之后我就会忘记了让我不开心的事情，被书中的内容吸引住了。从书中我懂得了海伦凯勒是的故事，知道了古代的历史，还了解到了我从未到过的国外的文化。所以，我觉得书永远都会是我最好的朋友。
点评：suspect是怀疑的意思。海伦凯勒的故事是一个励志的故事。
Tom is my best friend. Who is he? He is a dog. He is a special dog. My father give him to me at my 10 year birthday. The moment I saw him, I love him. His fur is white. He is very lovely. He knows how to make me happy. Everyday when I come back from school, I will play with him. He is also smart. He will drag my quilt if I sleep late. Besides, if my clock doesn’t alarm in the morning, he will bark at me. See, he is so clever that I couldn't help loving him.
汤姆是我最好的朋友。他是谁呢？他是一条狗。他是一条很特别的狗。他是在我十岁生日的时候我爸爸给的。我一看见他，我就爱上了他。他的毛是白色的。他非常的可爱。他懂得如何能够让我开心。每天我放学回家我都要和他一起玩。他也很聪明。如果我睡懒觉他会拽掉我的被子。而且如果早上我的闹钟不响了，他会朝我吠。看，他是如此的聪明，让我不得不爱他。
点评：sleep late 是睡懒觉的意思。couldn't help 后要接动名词表示禁不住……