「范文」
Fire
It was a windy morning. I was on the rooftop of my house， doing my daily exercises when I saw a mass of dense smoke rise from below. Five minutes later， came the shrill sirens of fire engines， ambulances and police cars. I knew right away a fire had broken out in the nearby squatter huts.
I looked down and saw the squatter settlement was buried in smoke， and a big red ball of fire was dancing like the devil of on the roofs of the shabby wood huts.
The residents were running here and there and there were women and children screaming and crying.
They were too frightened to do anything to save their property.
「评语」
这是一篇描述火灾的文章。作者描写了火灾现场人们的慌乱景象。其情形仿佛历历在目。