Shanghai college entrance examination composition proposition has always been leading the national reputation.
This year, Shanghai volume suddenly a beautiful toss, back to the pure and indifferent proposition composition, back to the topic that seems to be written by primary school students: I want to hold your hand. However, it is plain outside and gorgeous inside. "Think", "shake hands" and "you" are the three main words of gorgeous ingenuity and the cave.
"Think" is the topic. "Think" not only determines the outline of the article, but also sets the focus of the article not on how to "shake hands" and "shake hands" results, but on the origin of "shake hands" motivation. The origin of this story is either implicit in the deep-rooted story, or intertwined with unspeakable guilt and gratitude, or contains the enlightenment and perception of advancing with the times. "Thinking", as the carrier of cognition, thought and emotion, implies that there is a way of mind to narrate, a chord to pluck and a window of wisdom to open. "Thinking" is not only the cleverness of the proposition, but also the emotion and personality of this paper. Desalinate "think", even discard "think", directly deduce "hold your hand" how, inevitable partial loss.
Moreover, "holding" means holding hands tightly. This behavior comes from the heart, or from guilt, or from gratitude, or from firmness. "Holding" needs a thick bedding of "thinking", which means "holding" hands, sticking to "body", connecting with "heart", no sincere heart, no real feelings, no real thoughts, and the hands are "holding" unstoppable. No matter how many "holding" are literally piled up, they are also seemingly detached and powerless. In this case, it is not easy to examine the composition of Shanghai volume this year.
"Handshake" is the theme of soul. The Han nationality endows "handshake" with rich spiritual connotation and aesthetic taste. Choosing "handshake" as an opportunity for composition, it opens up a beautiful space of infinite connection, imagination and creation.
Shake hands to convey friendship. What the hand spreads out is to care is to understand is to support, what the hand carries on is to warm is to love is to believe. More than two thousand years ago, the most beautiful music and the most hopeful vision of building a harmonious society today is "holding the hand of the son and growing old with the son" (the book of songs and the wind).
Handshake shows the state. Handshake shows civilization, handshake shows gratitude; handshake shows sincerity, handshake shows bearing; handshake shows firmness, handshake shows accomplishment; handshake shows wisdom, handshake shows courage; handshake shows present, handshake shows future. "Handshake" will expose the pallor of today's youth's emotional world, which is conducive to promoting the later to strengthen the spiritual nourishment and improve the moral image. Handshake seems to be very perceptual, in fact, the behavior of mental servitude, perceptual is flower, rational is root, deep root is flower. There is no depth of thought, and the handshake is just plain. It's hard to see the charming scenery.
Hands can be individual, group, country and human. From the perspective of gratitude and gratitude, we can write about the family feelings of parents, the friendship of friends, the real feelings of people who help the poor and the needy, and the feelings of colleagues who work together in the same boat; we can also change our perspective, treat competitors rationally, and write about the passion of appreciating competitors to promote win-win situation. It can be drawn from modern people, or from the ancients. It can write the situation of shaking hands and being inspired with the ancient heroes in imagination.
The object "you" can be a person, a thing, or even an abstract virtual hand. For example, from the height of building an environment-friendly society, human beings should hold the hand of nature tightly.
From the structural form of the essay, the statement object of "I want to hold your hand" is "I", "I" is the initiative, "hold your hand" reflects the spirit of ahead planning, active opening, self-confidence, magnanimity and maturity. This coincides with the spirit of Shanghai, which embraces all rivers and pursues excellence. Shanghai has firmly grasped the hand of the Yangtze River Delta, and at the same time shoulders the common development mission of "serving the whole country and driving the surrounding areas". The International Conference of the SCO, especially the 2010 World Expo, has been held successfully. It is also a wonderful blooming of Shanghai - China holding the hand of the world!
"I think" is a kind of discourse mode, which is also in line with the discourse mode of Internet free blog that teenagers like. It gives examinees a sense of psychological adaptation and security, which is conducive to arousing students' interest and enthusiasm for writing, and embodies the new curriculum concept of student-oriented. This kind of proposition, which is really close to the examinee by breaking the way of putting on airs, making up stories and playing advanced games, is not a new one.
In a word, there is a "hand" to hold in the vast world, and an infinite scenery "to hold". A good composition does not consist in making new decorations, but in being able to write and judge. As if "a small matter" is the topic, it can be done by childishness and Lu Xun, but Lu Xun's "a small matter" is still handed down.