During the wheat harvest, the sky is very clear. In the sky over the golden wheat field, I occasionally swam a few white clouds leisurely. [the scenery is simple and vivid! ]
In the wheat harvest season, the sun is often hot at noon. Our hardworking parents have to work in the hot sun. [point out the "hot sun" twice before starting. Good repetition! ]Because as farmers, it's their duty. What a gift! ]
I am a farmer's son. I understand that our parents in the countryside depend on the land to live and provide us with school. They worked hard for their children, but there was no complaint. At home, I often hear them say: "as long as the children do well, no matter how hard or tired, we are willing to..." Poor farmer's parents! "Do well", this word is well used and vivid. ]
Let's study hard! Go all out! Our beloved parents, for the sake of a good life for us, buried themselves in the wheat fields in the hot sun. Do you know that taste? [the "slogan" is called here, but it sounds very pleasant. In the first two sections, "we" and "they" are said. Please taste them. ]
I realized it two days before I was going to the college entrance examination. It's hot and tired. At that time, my only hope was to cut the wheat quickly, take a bath at home, and then go to bed for five or six hours.
On the morning of June 5, my father got up early. It's about four o'clock. When he came down to the ground, he told me, "go to sleep again! Get up at six o'clock to cook, then wash clothes, and go to the ground at eight o'clock to deliver rice to me. " [it's all the simple words of the farmer's father, affectionate and real! How many parents let their children work two days before the college entrance examination? ]
When I wake up, I pick up my watch and look: 5:50. I guess I'm used to getting up early at school. I put on my clothes quickly. I soaked my clothes in an iron basin. Then I went into the kitchen to cook.
I cook and wash. Then he put the soup into the rice basin, took five steamed buns and put them all in the basket. I had a quick meal. I didn't even wash the bowl, so I rode to the ground.
When I arrived in the field, my father had cut seven or eight ridges. He had a lot of sweat on his face and his clothes were wet. He said, "have you eaten yet? I'll cut this ridge and eat...... " [sketch. Father's words, plain see "thick"! ]
About four or five minutes. He's cut. He took out the rice basin and steamed bun head from the basket and said: "my son, your father has no ability. He will have a good rest tomorrow when he gets to the county town! Take a good test the day after tomorrow. Don't be nervous... " This is the "temporary examination warning" for the children of "the day after tomorrow" college entrance examination when the farmer's father is in the field and in the hot sun! Heaven and earth are listening ]
I have been cutting wheat in the hot sun for more than five hours. [worthy of being a farmer's child! There is no fidgety before the exam, no "nutrition", no parents' clever "comfort", only the original color of "labor"! ]Back home, I didn't eat. Take a bath and go to sleep. [in response to the previous article, I am so tired that I am paralyzed! ]
Now, I'm working on the questions in the examination room. It's cool in the room. ["cool" is very important and heavy! ]When the test is over, I will stand in the hot sun for two hours to feel the feeling of the hot sun in the sky. [this is a big "bright spot", the full text is brilliant, everything is alive. "Nostalgia" came out, "heaven" came out, "big" farmers came out, and "pro" father came out. Everything is in silence ]
Comments: This article is very typical. It doesn't make things public. It doesn't make the "stars all over the sky" layout. It doesn't make the colorful and dazzling "collection". It doesn't play deep. It just describes the situation of my father cutting wheat and myself cutting wheat in a very simple way. In the middle section, I also called "slogan"! However, it is true, natural, true and pure. It comes straight from the ground, and the surging inner waves lurk in it. The father's words are few, but thick and broad; the son's emotional expression is very common, but all come from the heart. The biggest highlight is at the end: "the examination room is cool", which is hot compared with the wheat field; "when the examination is over, I will stand under the hot sun for two hours to feel the taste of the hot sun in the sky" - there is no son in the world who would like to thank him for being the father of the farmer, and no one in the article has used this kind of ink, which is smart! It's very touching, and it's long-term! Chinese teachers at the front line of middle school can take this as a teaching example to further grasp the composition orientation.